All Comments on 'Falling for Stockholm Pt. 01'

The writing isn't bad and the premise is interesting, but this is certainly Non-Con, not BDSM. You'd probably have a lot higher rating in the Non-Con sectios as lots of people who like BDSM actively low rate misplaced stories.

- /5 starts (not rated due to wrong genre)

Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it since this is my first story. I'm hoping that the story eventually ends up being more BDSM as she starts to fall for him and it becomes more consensual but you might be right it probably should have been put into the non-consent category.

Agree with JPMaggers. Suggest following original storyline. Why would she start falling for her kidnapper?

The first few lines were ok, but then it starts getting a little predictable, If you write what you really want to, without holding back, try to be a little more descriptive. I reckon you are going down the right track.