by RopebunnyCutie
These one page chapters detract from the story. I want to
See where this goes but if you keep up the one page at a time
Then I'm just gonna give it up. So far good writing and what
Could be a good story.
Thanks:)
Ed
I love the story hope update soon but would be really nice if could find out why he thinks its alright that he kidnapped her before she gives in fully hope that made sense
Just wanted to say absolutely love Lani's smart mouth! She's one sassy chick. Not 100% convinced by her kidnapper but then I still have more to read so looking forward to seeing where this goes.