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Anonymousover 7 years agoI'm not trying to be to harsh but it needs work.
You have quite a few spelling errors. The chapters need to be longer if you plan to continue. And there are few other things but the two I mentioned are your big stuff.
Anonymousover 7 years agoheavenly
this is a wonderful idea, and I can't wait to see how you develop this relationship
Anonymousover 7 years agoit realy was to short to form a real opinion. what i did get to read seemed to be promising though.
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