All Comments on 'Falling Hard Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I really like it

I really really like this story. How not to like? It's so humanly written yet well there is an odd twist to everything. Heaven isn't just good old fashion angel. They have computers, Security System, hell they even have karoke session for angels to enjoy! Throwback yet hi-tech. Real unique story of its own. You go girl!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
yes more more

i love where this story is going i can't wait to find out what you have in store for them.. I am really looking forward to it though..can't wait for more keep writing.. hope you get to add more soon..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
HOT!!

Oh! Please hurry with the next part. I can't wait to read it! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Amazing

For a starter, you're great!

First three chapters and you've got me fired up.

Please continue, cause I really think there's more to Athan than being a demon in this story and at "Demon Dot Com".

"Ingat!" (take care)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
More Please!

What an amazing story! Can't wait for the next installment!

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