All Comments on 'Falling Off Track'

When the seduction in the hotel room started I thought "This is totally implausible, and it's turned into another 'stroke' story". I had enjoyed and preferred the tenor and style of the writing up to that moment, but read on, nevertheless. As I read I wondered if it was all in Charlie's head and then the ending began. The realisation that it indeed was all a fantasy inside his head as he slept on the train was quite pleasant.

I liked the words she used to rouse him, nicely merging the reality with the fantasy.

I'd even be tempted to read it again.

Loved it. The twist end was excellent.

Best story I've read here or on other sites.