All Comments on 'Fallout'

by Lynn_Elliot

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I like it was not what I expected and the beginning was tad long but i loved the characters

GrumpyGambyGrumpyGambyalmost 12 years ago
Great story

Fabulous. Hate it when I see a great story with so few comments. Keep going please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Keep Going!

Loved this story. You should write more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
You've written yourself a very good story.

I for one enjoyed the long beginning, I really like how you were building the characters and the universe it takes place in and whatnot, also zombie apocalypse, I dig that type of shit. I really liked it. You can write more. A sequel perhaps?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More Chapters!

Loved this story. I really liked how she didn't want to do it, but in the end loved doing it. Please keep going.

Auden JamesAuden Jamesalmost 12 years ago
kinda anticlimactic

don't belive you about her being that much into the old fuck. don't see why. after all, he's an all-out asshole. and the two boys seem like implausible wimps in a world that's supposedly that fucked-up. sorry.

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