All Comments on 'False Alarm Ch. 04'

I don't like Niala reasons for keeping her child a secret. It's ridiculous. It makes the story seem dated. She sounds ashamed. After 5 MONTHS, if he hadn't met her son yet, she could have kept them from meeting without deception. A grown woman would have said, "I have a son, but I don't bring random men around him." Good grief.

This a very sweet story, but it is dragging. Hopefully, whatever you are building it up to will be worth it.

i totally agree, he can know about her son without meeting him. what, she will bring him up after a year or something? Sounds like those horrific stories from the 50's whren women hid their kids or called them siblings so she could get a man without being seen as having 'complications'

I enjoyed this chapter. I also understand why she don't want to let her guard down but she should know every man isn't the same. You really cannot judge him by what the last man did. I do agree that telling Austin that she has a son should have happened in the beginning, he doesn''t have to meet him unless they are serious.

LOL…great update. I agree with the other comments that it is way pass time that she mention her son! I mean that is kind of shady and deceptive to not mention someone that is a big part of your life. I get her not introducing Sean to every Dick, Harry and Joe but she shouldn’t pretend he doesn’t exist either. I wish these two would stop playing chicken with each other because clearly that is leading them into trouble, especially Niala! I mean if she actually dials that fool Sam up for a booty call I would slap the hell out of her myself! You have a hot fireman right there use him!!!...lol I never understood why people settle for the next best thing instead of the real thing in case of Austin with “almost” Destiny and Niala with a thought of Sam. I mean I get it is scary putting yourself out there but 5 months and they are still using the “just friends” line o_O Austin must be a saint because most guys would bounce

All that will be covered like I said I have it here just needs to be edited and I have help now sooo...

Also it has not been 5 months *Goes to check* No, remember they saw each other but didn't actually start talking until later. It's been 3 or 3 1/2, which is still no excuse(I personally think it's kinda stupid but, hey she does what she wants lol). Niala hasn't done it in 5 months. Sorry for the confusion.

Oh and, Austin did have his FWB's I just don't discuss them because it has nothing to do with Nia. "They are "just friends" ha. The only reason Destiny came up is because, that is when he realizes he only wants her.

Thanks for reading!

Okay, that makes sense. I was about to say, unless these people are saints or really like tortured/unrelenting love they need to get on the ball...lol. Can't wait for chapter 5

I really like this story, can't wait for the next chapter!

she's wrong for not mentioning her son yet, although I think she should soon. With men these days you cannot be too careful. I would tell him, but he for damn sure wouldn't be meeting my Sean anytime soon. I would NOT take random guys around my son. Yeah, one could argue that Austin isn't random, but if Niala decided she didn't want to continue their 'whatever' tomorrow then he could easily slip into the "random" category. And at Sean's age, as you can see in Sam's case, he can easily get attached to men. I don't know about anyone else, but I certainly wouldn't want several men going in and out of my child's life.

Anyhow, I really like this story and the characters, except Sam LOL

think that she needs to at least mention Sean and see his reaction, if he decides to stay; then slowly they can be introduced...

Funny how he told her her voive was too deep as she expressed her sexual excitement with him-LOL

I absolutely love the song Electric Feel! I love the diversity in your story. So ready for the next chapter!

-Jaz

get it together kids.. just be together already lol I hate them so much I love it