All Comments on 'Familiar Friends Ch. 01'

Pretty good! Hope you make more chapters of this series, and sequels to your other ones like The Change.

Really looking forward to the next chapter! Well written and really hot.

It almost feels like there was another page to go ... but can't wait for part 2!

I totally chopped part of the second part off. I had like 3 or more paragraphs but couldn't find any happy place to end chapter 1 to balance both out so I ended it where I did. Although, I could've done it when she fell asleep after masturbating. I just always seem to end chapters when characters fall asleep so I didn't want to do it yet again.

In other news, the next/last chapter is posted. Will probably go live on Monday.

One fucking awsume story and a most enjoyable read. Retired Army NCO279C

Maybe I missed something, but how did Rachel become infected? I don't think Liz bit her or anything. Is one touch seriously enough? Well, we'll see in part 2. Great story otherwise. :)