by Lycandope
This was from a failed commission - I posted it anyway but the original commissioner asked me to change the names and remove the boyfriend. I keep forgetting to upload the edited first part. Sorry for the confusion but I hope it turned out okay!
You could have just stayed with it, after all it is your story and the first one was actually sounding better.
I preferred the feel of the first story.... it's possible part of it was dealing with the confusion from the name changes... so it sort of felt like a current story that I came in on the middle of after expecting a continuation of the first story...
Also could be that even if I felt like it was the second half of the first story with name changes which I had to continually think about it WASN'T a continuation... she's bi in the first, there's potential for another chapter involving the tom (Brad) in another chapter... and did I mention my confusion often enough...? =P
By the way, I really LIKED the first story unchanged with the three people....
The girls have names different from the first chapter. Also, no mention of Brad here. Was this written as a separate story?
Hey - yeah, it was originally a commission but the person did like a lot of things in chapter 1 so I decided to just release it as my own thing. Except I had to change names in chapter 2 and remove the guy. Sorry!
Amazing story !! I really love your style, but the only downside is the split between the two parts
The names changed between chapter 1 and chapter 2. That's rather jarring and killed my libido which is unfortunate for me. It looks like a fun story.
I do hope you'll write more werecat stories, such as visiting the tale of how Liz became infected, do they infect Brad and become a happy kitty triad, or do they try to hide it from him, or some other combination of ideas?
I just found your work and am making progress on reading it all.
In chapter 1 they were Liz and Rachel. Now they're Julie and Amanda? Unless I missed something.