by Merlinswand
That is a great start to a story and I can't wait for the next chapter . Thank you for the HOT story ......
You have set up wonderfully what should be a nice, long tale. Excellent job! Please hurry with the next chapter.
As a stand alone story, it is really very well done. As the possible start of a series that could be so good in so many ways, it is fantastic.
Great story, just wish chapter 2 would have been posted. Nice details and felt I was actually watching the action as it was happening.