All Comments on 'Family Bonds'

Very well developed story and erotic.

Good start up, please continue with the next installment. I'm looking forward to see what happens next. Will the Dad be written more into the story, he needs to get his act together, he has a hot wife. He should be all over her! A foursome sound great!

Gave you 5 stars for content, I love brother/sister/mother sex, no real flaws to point out. Could perhaps had a little more build-up and some drama when the twins were discovered but over all I think you're a writer with much potential. Please continue to submit, I look forward to more of your work. Thanks very much for sharing!

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Outstanding first effort. We look forward to more soon.

Great story so far. I gave you a 5 star rating. This could be the beginning of a fantastic series. Keep up the good work.

VERY VERY GOOD. REALLY ENJOYED STORY. LOOKING FORWARD TO MANY MORE.

GOOD BEGINNING..AND TOTALLY IGNORE THAT RACIST/LOW LIFE BIGOT WITH THE USUAL RANT... BUT DEFINETELY GET RAY INTO TOTAL FAMILY ACTION..

FOR MOMS & WOMEN LIKE MYSELF..NOTHING MORE OF A TURN-ON THAN WHEN TOTAL FAMILY ACTION INCLUDING DAD/SON BI BOTH WATCHING AND BEING IN THE CENTER OF...FOR REALLY SEX-CHARGED FUN...TRUST US..WE KNOW..

I like your idea, but you need to watch your usage of homophones: their, there and they're as an example.

On another note, do NOT let the father get involved -- especially in a bi-sexual relationship with Kyle -- unless it is to wake his lazy ass up to how he is neglecting Shauna. He should not even get a shot at his daughter if he cannot be bothered with taking care of his wife for so long.

great story. thanks for writing.

Knock her up and give mom another set of twins

Great start. Please continue and publish another chapter shortly.

who left a racist rant? a queer reference is homophobic not racist you twit. no one mentioned skin color.i do agree the dad should not be rewarded with fucking the daughter or anyone else in the house.if he couldnt take advantage of an empty house then leave him pounding his suckretary.

Keep up the good work!

This is a wonderful work keep it up

great story more please! Let us know why da lost intrest hope he is not fuking around. If he is having troul daughtr might help wake up past lust.

Oh man this had me thinking My own family incest sex! I couldn't control myself and remembering when I was first fucked by my family mom dad brother and sister. I guess I should share that story later. Would love to hear more about this family and just got to say this was so fucking hot I came multiple times. And the third time I came I shot it right my mouth it was so good. Thank you so much for this hot taboo incest story!!!!!!

Loved mom/son/daughter threeway fuck stories. Glad to see a new chapter was just written. Hope it won't take another 15 months for chapter 3.

AWESOME....would have loved to do that to my mom and oldest sister....i missed my chance....seen my mom totally naked once.....and only seen my sister's tits....and I was at the age of raging hormones....man I missed my chance

What a way to enjoy your kids, and just think all summer long. The bad part is dad, what a bummer. Well mom has the kids happy happy ,hope for a long hot summer. nice read.... THANKS

Good story. I appreciated the mother's maturity concerning the brother/sister relationship. The chemistry between the three characters was believable. The respect and sensitivity for the emotional and mental state of the mother, son and daughter is exactily how I would expect a truly consensual incestuous relationship would develop and grow.