All Comments on 'Family Development Ch. 09: Bonding'

I am really loving the slow easy pace of this tale. Hope there is more to cum.

FAMILY DEVELOPMENT has finished. Look for TAYLOR MAID... coming soon to a Literotica near you :-) MP2

DAMN TURTLE GET UR NOSE OUTTA MISHAS ASS HOLE FOR AWHILE OR GET A MOTEL ROOM SOMEWHERE. DAMN, I LIKED THE SERIES BUT THERE WAS SO MUCH,,,, OKAY SO I KNOW IT'S A FANTASY, SHORT STORY, BUT STILL.

I GUESS PART OF MY BIGGEST PROBLEM IS I WAS AN EDITOR FOR A MAJOR PUBLISHING COMPANY AND THEN A HUNTING MAGAZINE AND ALTHOUGH THE STORY LINE, OH FUCK IT, NOT WORTH MENTIONING BECAUSE 90% OF ALL SHORT STORY WRITERS WHEN WRITING THIS TYPE OF STORY USES THE SAME MISTAKES, SO FUCK IT!

STILL, YOU HAVE A GOOD HEAD ON UR SHOULDERS, MISHAPEARL2!

I kinda skipped over the beginning, middle and most of the end... Your last line was sweet. I don't think I have an obligation to "Answer" the reader's questions raised by these stories. They are slices of life and a lot of unanswered questions are carried to bed with us every night. I am working on Family Weekend at the moment. Please read that when the Literotica editors approve it. Your opinions matter, Randog. :-) MP2

Unbelievably erotic. And very well written. I have never liked a father son dp threesome - kinda creeps me out - but this one was great. Maybe because it flows so well with the rest of the story. 5 stars. I’m glad there’s more - because you’re opening up more questions than you’re answering! On to “Taylor Made”. Although “Taylor Made” always reminds me of a great burger.

...about Taylor Made burgers. I used the title “Taylor Maid” as a pun because Megan’s dad, John Taylor is a golfer... you know, Taylor Made brand clubs. Anyway, we know Megan has a phat little burger, too. Even if she’s never been to Detroit’s! MP2 :-)