All Comments on 'Family Dinner'

This story is obscene!! I can't believe you didn't put it in another section. If anyone did this in real life they'd be going to jail. Sicko!

I liked how Jeff punished them for immodesty by making them strip down to where they were even more immodest.

unlike the lifeguard story, this one failed in every way: character development, writing, plot.

I suppose some might think this is ok and if they are the ones on the recieving end of it and actually enjoy it, more power to them. I on the other hand had to put up with this when I was small and IMHO anyone that would do this to a kid should be drawn and quartered. If I couldn't defend myself against this face to face I would shoot the bastard in the back!!!

In case you didn't know, this isn't child abuse. Both of the girls are of legal age. This is plain old assault, at a level that makes it a felony. That sadist, Jeff, cannot require his daughters to undergo this so-called "punishment." The pathetic, sick wife can engage in consensual behavior with this brainless sicko, but he can't touch his daughters.

Such a failure of a story.

Not the best story, the premise is flawed, and the writing stilted