All Comments on 'Family Fantasy'

by Helen1954

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I quit near the beginning. Too many similarities with your other stories. You need some fresh scenarios.

Bill S.

pjhale121pjhale121over 6 years ago
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I so wish there was a second chapter to this story. It is such a rich and delightful setup, it would be so much fun to hear where you take these characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Interesting. Not very erotic

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 10 years ago
To heck with the details!

This was delightfully kinky - and very unusual. Thank you for a marvellous story and please have five stars for it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Fun scenario. Almost "humor" with the grandkids watching. How old are they in this story. How did they get to the house?

What a way to start the day

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