All Comments on 'Family Friend with Benefits'

Proof read next time. Also, your dialogue is wildly unrealistic.

Just ignore the "Terrible" comment.....some people are far too full of themselves....I think your story was wonderful !

Did you notice how the title and most of this person's "comments" were about ignoring someone who dared to have a different opinion, rather than just posting their opinion? If one is to be ignore, guess which one is more deserving of being ignored?

It wasn't terrible but it wasn't great either. The language was very stilted. I found it kind of strange that the main character couldn't say the words cock or tits but could say cunt.

So next time you go there see if there's an additional gnome.

Her version of notches on the bedpost !!!

I liked it, though I have to disagree that 58 is old, though from the vantage point of a 32 year old, it's positively ancient. I'm 56, and 58 is not looking so old now. That said, I have my eyes on a family friend who is 70. Perhaps some day, I have to just wait that one out(we're all still married and a swap/sharing is not an option), and hope we both live long enough.

Not to be the grammar police, but please do proofread, proofread, proofread. Then put it away for a week and proofread again. If you have someone who can look your piece over before you send it, take advantage of that. Please learn correct use of quotation marks and commas. Look at some of the other stories on here to see how others develop and write dialogue. It was a readable story, but the grammar and usage are distracting.

As my wife is also 58, I could identify with Wendy's desires. My wife has amazing passion and response, more so than most women many years younger. We've been married only 3 years so I've had plenty to compare from my younger years and she leaves me panting and totally drained every time we fuck. More chapters needed about Wendy!

understand that LW means women and men fuck around. Get over yourself. AI gave this a 5

Older women are the best... "the bestest"!

Loved it, gave u a 5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥.)

Wendy is a keeper. Full stop. End of story.

I LOVED this story, gave it a 5- (4.6 = 92%.)

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Anon - about 6 years ago

Seems like the perfect age!

As my wife is also 58, I could identify with Wendy's desires. My wife has amazing passion and response, more so than most women many years younger. We've been married only 3 years so I've had plenty to compare from my younger years and she leaves me panting and totally drained every time we fuck. More chapters needed about Wendy!

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5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥), 👍👍!

Wendy is a keeper. Full stop. Period.

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Anonymous, almost 4 years ago

LOVE IT: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5/5 = 100%)! The story is very erotic & totally realistic.

Older women are the best... "the bestest"!

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[☆☆☆☆☆ (5)]

Wendy od a keeper. Full stop. Period.

This story is totally true yo life!

I would have done this for her. If she was bold enough to request oral sex, I would do all of her.

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5).