All Comments on 'Family Nurse Ch. 01'

What a great story - was a motion picture - those images you created in our minds (your readers) caused us to want more!

A five does not do it justice!

Wonderful

Well gosh, this was honestly kinda sad (as in, not happy, kinda a downer, etc.)-- great storytelling, but not something I could get off to. Which is cool, hats off to you as a writer. I'm about to read part 2. We'll see if that'll surprise me, too