All Comments on 'Family Vacation Ch. 01'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 8 years ago

Loved it. Can't wait for chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot!!!!!

Looking forward to another chapter.

jimmyj57jimmyj57over 8 years ago
Good start

More please !

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So hot

I am so turned on right now. Thank you a great read and I can't wait till the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Continue The Trip Story

Please continue the family trip story .... started hot and hop it keeps on rolling

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Bravo

Very well done. You made it come alive in my mind's eye. I could see it, hear it, feel it and smell it all. Please don't stop (which is what Mae said the first time Wren tasted her).

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Story

Loved the story, all so real. Just like the fantsay that I keep having. Cannot wait for Chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Like the premise and will read next chapters BUT

Really!!!

in what seemed 5 minutes on the road,Mom,Daughter have Tits out! 5 mins later Bro & Sis are fucking! mom is climbing in back to get involved then Somehow the dad gets involved

All this is happening whilst the dad still driving #Really!!!

And please she read incest stories,runs around naked has no problems with Brother seeing this & her Dildo collection & nothing has ever happened before Really Really

think it needs an editor to make story a bit believable

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice but needs to be a bit more believable

I also like how they try to casually slip advertisements for this site into the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot and heavy

My twin sister and I really enjoyed your story, especially as I read it out loud to her and my Daddy. We are now 20, still living at home with Daddy. Our entire family are 4th generation naturists. We have three sisters - 19, 17, and 15. (Our Mom died 8 years ago.) We are waiting for our two youngest sister to reach 18 so we can include them in our sex sessions. We think they have their own, together, but can't be sure. We live on the Gulf of Mexico so seldom go on a vacation. Every day is a vacation for us. Lying naked on the beach with Daddy, we can't help but suck his large cock, and when it's safe, climb astride him and ride him to orgasm,his and ours. Family sex is great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great Start to a story

Thanks for writing.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 7 years ago

It's been a year and a half since chapter one. Any idea if we'll see a chapter two sometime in the future??

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
I love car trips.

So much sex makes the trip better

Need more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
how about a sequel?

what a great story. time for chapter 2 and maybe 3!!! love the sex and the characters. well-written!

Manojm68Manojm68almost 3 years ago

Nice story. Need more chapters

writerjabwriterjab18 days ago

Absurd, like most of your writing

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