All Comments on 'Family Vacation Ch. 1'

One very sexy story!

And the use of proper grammar and spelling is very much appreciated.. it makes the story so much easier to read!

Nice workup, excellent use of English, Paragraphs, et al. I look forward to reading the rest of this story. This is, by the way, very believeable. Well Done!

Thank You!

you're pissed you pedantic twat. BELIEVABLE.

it's a pity David had to jerk off in his own hand. Obviously, the place for his big load of semen was up his mother's warm wet cunt.

great opening chapter