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by MishaPearl2

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goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
ok - my first real gripe

a little short - fun, sexy and well written. but very short. still 5 stars - not for the chapter - but you MP and the overall story. it's a great read.

MishaPearl2MishaPearl2over 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the compliment, GoDucks,

As for the gripe, I re-read this chapter. It’s short in length, but chock-full of action. Plus it is a teasing lead-in to the following chapter. Watch out for mule deer in the meadows! LOL MP2 :-)

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I am MishaPearl. I had a software issue and had to re-register as MishaPearl2. All of MishaPearl and MishaPearl2 stories and poems are by the same author. Sorry for any confusion or difficulty in sorting them by author. Thank you for reading my work.