All Comments on 'Fantasies Become Reality Ch. 01'

by SweetAsCherryPie

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 6 years ago
not bad

I guess there is more than just sleeping at a sleep over

jsmangisjsmangisabout 6 years ago
Great First Story.

Keep up the good work, I think you've got the hang of this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Slow down

You are going wayyyy too fast with this story. It’s not sexy at all

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Short

Wow. Straight to the point. Good, but more plot please, the thrill is in the tease and storyline. You'll get there

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