by OlderButtWiser
It was a very well written story and I enjoyed it very much. It doesn't leave much room for add on stories, however, I would read them if they should show up.
Very good story and good to see another MN person sharing their dreams and desires.
Oh My god that was the very best story i have read in years on here. You did a great, wonderful job at it. keep up the wonderful work.
What would life be without fantasies. I wish this one was mine. Keep them coming. (no pun intended)
There are only a few on here that I truly enjoy reading there stories and right now if I had but one wish to make,* it would be you with a story every month.! Seems like lately my wishes have not come true though as they have become nightmares with lots of Doctors and Hospitals in them. By this time next year I don't think I will be here to read another one of your stories,* and it makes me sad to know that you will probably never write another story anyway.! God bless you and your "special gift".! Take care. JAG
So sensitively written - I am in love with your writing.
Thank you.
Sascha
Sweet. I think of that as a very positive comment. So few stories describe the emotions that many of us have about those we have loved. You have captured the strong emotions of love and lust that combine in a good relationship.
This story is by far the best I have read anywhere. I could almost feel myself right there with Karen, experiencing every aspect of the blossoming relationship. If I could have given you a 10 out of 5, I would have.
well executed story. erotic yet intriguing reading. you did well.
There are many of us out here who wish we could have an experience and then life like that.
Being an older gentleman myself I thoroughly enjoyed this story and the intimacy you described. I only wish I could find someone like her. Thank you.
Killing me softly with your song....I had a relationship much like this for eight months when I was 76...You nailed it for me and brought the best parts of it back to life for me. Since it was your first story you wrote, I hope there was some truth to it for you...