All Comments on 'Fantasies Fulfilled Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Believable and sexy

Good story, good pace, very believable & sexy. Look forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
The best so far...

Everyman's favourite fantasy - well done! Pieater

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Storyteller extraordinary.

Making the improbable seem possible and real is an art. Anyone can do the slam bas stuff but giving this fantasy life as you have done is the mark of a real writer. Thank you. I will read the remainder with expectation.

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
well I'll be

ducked

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Really well written!

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