All Comments on 'Fantastic World Ch. 03'

"The clearing, which had been full of the scent of dew-kissed jasmine, was now beginning to fill with another scent entirely."

This is such a wonderful passage! It provokes such crystal clear imagery that makes the passage very intense and easy to imagine. I'd love to be in a place like that.

Jaz'rin is deliciously scrumptious. He's quite exotic and mysterious. I want to know more about him.

All in all these chapters have been quite compelling and the fantasy world is very well constructed. I can clearly imagine what it would look like in my mind.

3 down, 10 to go!