All Comments on 'Fantastic World Ch. 07'

"You are every bit as great as the stories say you are" - I can't resist a quote from the begginning of the story, but, highly appropriate- an intense and action oriented chapter, extrenely well written- Callia actions/reactions to her abuse and revenge are well laid out, and the flashback provides an interesting perspective on her action; clearly she is more damaged than she admits to, but uses the intensity of emotional response to focus on being a warrior rather than a victim; but to stop being the former requires acknowledgement of the latter- an inner conflict very well laid out. Really superb wrting and storytelling.

GR8 battle . The sex scenes are fantastic . The long drawn out foreplay then sex all to be repeated with different acts 2 , 3 , 4 times is very well written .