All Comments on 'Fantasy'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
It's rushed

The story reads as though it's trying to finish too soon.

VertexVertexabout 9 years ago
Great debut

Enjoyed it a lot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Loved this story!

Loved it

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