All Comments on 'Fantasy Football Player'

this is not a gay story. its a fetish story

and I hope you never publish another word again.

This is neither a gay story nor a fetish story; it is a mentally disturbed story.

Well written and bizarrely fascinating

"this is not a gay story. its a fetish story"

I agree. I submitted it to be in the Fetish section and I have no idea why it was put in the Gay Male section. I have asked for it to be moved to the Fetish section.

"Brilliant

Well written and bizarrely fascinating"

Thank you. I appreciate the kind comment.

Its 4 pages long, you should have stopped reading after the first page, dumbass.

I thought it was fascinating. Good work.

I totally got off to this. The way the situation played out was so awesome, I wish that happened to me!

I have received a few e-mails of private feedback from this story including one today which indicated that he would like to message me about the story ... except that he did not include any contact information. Feel free to e-mail me at nrjb2@yahoo.com or check out my other stories at http://www.assdisc.com.

Excellent story, it was exciting. Although more detail on the feet wouldve been appreciated. I love the ending

Love this story mate!! Thank you for writing it.

I enjoyed this story much. I like how respectful the master was. Thanks for posting.

The way this built up into a Master Slave dynamic was awesome. I would love to get a follow up for the Master Slave dynamic. I would love to see how it evolves into the Slave learning to please the Master, and the Master learning how to keep good order and discipline for the Slave.... Really awesome.

Hot story! I know how Tedman feels. There is just something about humiliation that can be such a turn on in the right situations.

What a good story! Will there be more chapters? Maybecwith some trampling?