by shadowboxer6
WoW
That was great, one of the best fantsay stories ever. Its so real that you can see the people before you.
It made me think of people I have crushes on.
Awsome work.
DK
It is really the extreme sensuality that draws me into your world of fantasy. That allows the sexuality to take its firm hold and carry me over the edge.
I'd like to see more writing from you.
Steve