by Bluepen451
Good literary technique. Few have the capacity to develop a good frame tale (tale within a tale). Lots of detail from the female point of view.
If you like the story within a story format, take a look at my Looking Back series. it uses a similar approach, but it is longer--13 chapters.
Been in that wonderful scenario so many times. Nothing made my wife hotter than telling her a fantasy while we indulged in some form of sex. And if it was occasionally about me, I'd swear it really happened, that would keep her going for weeks.