All Comments on 'Fantasy Reversal Ch. 07'

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eagle122999eagle122999almost 14 years ago
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I hope that isn't the way this story ends, it was rather abrupt. I look forward to reading more.

BertaCDBertaCDover 11 years ago
Bit of a letdown!

While I'm reading this well aware there is another chapter at the time this was posted it must've been a real letdown to your readers. This is the shortest chapter with the least content compared to all your previous ones. Previously the clandestine gatherings/fantasies were taken to some conclusion which is not the case as we are left hanging in a stall in the women's bathroom! This chapter was a letdown for me.

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