All Comments on 'Fat Bottomed Girl'

She makes the rockin' world go round! Lovely story -- thank you -- five stars.

She's def a keeper. Perform for her bro!!

You completely ruined the story by making him dumber than a stump. Even for fiction is was awful.

John you already did it, you can't undo. I'm embarr assed to say it, your being a girl about this. I say you beg forgivness and be ready to perform again in person for her friend's as well.

Call me

Very good cfnm story. This is well written and DIS believable. Very sexy for those of us who are into this subject. Also liked I the way you start off kind of smarmy and get more romantic as it goes along. What's with the critic; he almost seemed gay-fended. I really liked your ending and the promise of more. I hope you will come to your senses and write more. She's gonna be angry at your reaction. Can't wait.

L O

I thoroughly enjoyed your story of a man, reluctant to be dominated, but growing more willing to expose himself. I hope you will keep writing more in this series

And, I loved the ending! Let's face it; women love to talk with their girl friends about men and a man who will strip for them and "spank the monkey" is really too good to be true! Of course she bragged! And shared with her friend. And of course John must pay the price! Delicious!

I'm not usually into CFNM stories, but I thought this one was very good. I look forward to reading the other chapters.

As a fellow author, I really appreciate the work this author has done, especially his personal take on his love of big-assed women. I love this line from right near the start:

"I mean some bitches are so fat, you'd go broke trying to keep them in donuts and panties."

This story gets five stars just for that line alone. I love it. Well done, author, well done.

Love it such a sexy story. I would love to be that guy

I would Love to be in John's Place !

What a fun & kinky relationship!

Shelia just wanted to show off her good little boy to Bev, well done.