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Anonymousover 11 years agoClosing the shudder??
I have to admit this story makes me shudder, but if I was at the window I would be closing the shutter.
ramonbrookover 10 years agoI see a few things wrong ....
1) there is no fatal attraction
2) there is no wicked stepdaughter
3) the story is not finished
Story was very good until it ended without a conclusion.
Would really like to give this story high marks, however with the abrupt ending couldn't do it.
Gave it a 3, with further chapters would definitely revise that!
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