All Comments on 'Fatal Edge'

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stroudlestroudlealmost 6 years ago

The lesson to be learned here is always be honest to your other half. Oh and beware of lovers brandishing a Goose feather.

You are so careful to keep reminding the reader that the rough stuff is only play acting and consensual , that is allows the reader to enjoy it fully . That's my view anyway. Well written fantasy role play fun.

jc

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Writing lesbian erotica has become one of the most important things in my life. I try to make all my main characters at least reasonably three-dimensional, and balance out the Smokey Sagas between sweet, fluffy, light-hearted pieces with happy endings, and rough, sinister tale...