All Comments on 'Fatal Oath'

what a dark story... not what I expected... good job! although it is more pleasant to get a happy ending and to see the man crawling on his knees and the woman ruling over him rather than killing him, I can see how your choices have made the story more impactful. I hope she is not going to regret her choices, as that would then compromise the integrity and strength of the story so far

Not my cup of tea. She does seem very spoiled and delusional, so I didn't enjoy her character at all. Story went south. She's willing to kill her own baby, she not exactly a good person lol. Good writing tho, hope for the best

It could be done, especially if no one was near enough to notice, only a trusted physician.

I thought this story would have a good ending, but she seems to be a selfish little bitch, willing to kill the man who came to love her. He didn't beat her, or torture her, she is all about me, me, me. That bitch should of died.

I don't mind when the story has an unhappy ending. It gives you more happy vibes when it does but each author reserves the right to make the ending sad, etc. But in this case she was just a selfish bitch. He may have taken her in the sense of kidnapping her. But that wasn't uncommon During Medeival times. And to be honest he was very respectful of her, making sure she got enjoyment from it. And she really did seem to enjoy being taken. He really did love her and she should have just walked away. And also saying she will kill her own child? She is a terrible terrible person and it should have been her who had died. I really hope you write a sequel where he faked his own death. Because she should be the one to die right after giving birth. Maybe her maid can kill her

But very glad you wrote it the way you did. Brilliant satire / fingers up to standard sentimental (and gendered) storylines. I had fun reading it. Many thanks

This was fucking awesome. It's a great reflection of the times it seems to be written from and for some reason I picture her as an evil Xena type, pre-reform. A lot of people here think she was selfish or spoiled but she had to relive a daily reality for 365 days that her family and people turned her over without a single thought or word given to her. And Zander really believed he was a gift from God to women. It's nice every now and again to read about a man like that getting a reality check. Didn't happen enough in history. Thanks!

Yes, she was a selfish bitch, but the King never really saw what he did. He never saw that he was actually raping her and said, you can have as many men as your oh want. He wasn't willing to change the world where men and women were equal. She is a spoiled brat, and hatred can make people do crazy things, but I loved this story. I want her To go try and kill her parents, but then I want her to see her mother and then just change things, change the laws. Teach her male child that he can be the king and still treat women as equals. She could be so much more than a spoiled brat

loved it. Well written.

What the fuck was this story? Alisha never provided an alternative, she never provided anything to live for. The king was a rapist and a murderer, but she was worse. He wanted to have his ends justify his means, bit she had no ends. She killed her brother, her parents, and intends to destroy an entire culture, but she has nothing worth fighting for. She is revenge incarnate, she is stubbornness without reason. She is not a person, she is lower than an animal, at least animals are capable of love. This story is not erotic at all, so it should be placed under non-erotic.

My favourite thing about this story is that no one in the comments has realised yet that this is a direct satire of At His Majesty's Pleasure. Alicia/NotAlais is definitely over the top and ridiculous, goddamnit at least she remembers her hate instead of melting into a pile of warm goo!

Like, as much as people might dislike this ending- but this is pretty much THE escapist fantasy for any kidnapped princess. I could see someone waking up to this and being like, "Holy shit am I terrible enough to actually do thay, or is this place making me crazy?"

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I was hoping for a twist in the end....one where she has her own revenge and Xander punished, but at the same time, give readers hope about a reconciliation in her own terms.. But her character ended up being so hateful. Her coldness and hatred about everything doesn't make her character strong. It makes her weak. At one point, she would beg for pleasure, and next, she hates the guy for making her horny. Geez. She was so hateful she would kill her own baby. I can never bring myself to like a character like that. Never reading anything from this author again.

So I see a lot of comments immediately denouncing this story, but I have to say to me it is very realistic. When taking into captivity a lot of things happen to the human mind. Some bend into submission because they feel as though they don't have any other options, others revert into themselves and let the situation they are in become them- absorbing their own insanity into life. Others become angry. A type of angry that taints their soul, and if they where to let go they would probably let go of themselves completely and spiral into madness. This is a story about a girl, raped, taken, abused- who holds on to her anger. Lets it become her. Condeming those who forced her to suffer by the hands of a man stronger, bigger, and (debateably) more powerful. She finds her own strength in her will. And though her anger reaches porportions that are probably not good or healthy in any way, she does it because she wants to survive. I understand why she did what she did, doesn't necessarily mean I agree with her way of handling it. But also a lot of you expected her to fall for a man she had no obligatio to fall for. Just cause he loved her doesn't mean she had to love him.

And i agree with whatever anonimous said this is a twist of at his majesty's pleasure. I like all this hatred, she's suddenly like that khaleesi whose name is too dificult to spell

Hmm... I enjoyed this story, but I'm still trying to wrap my head around it. I can see why other commenters have cited At His Majesty's Pleasure (so sadly left unfinished!) as being a variant of the general story. However, my first thought after Lyssa's speech was of Miss Havisham from Great Expectations. Only Lyssa has a much better back story for wanting to raise her daughter to be an avenging angel, and Lyssa's hate curiously doesn't extend to all men, but rather men who abuse and subjugate women as well the Empire that fosters them. It's fascinating! I thoroughly enjoyed the mind-bend and definitely did not expect that from a story on Literotica. Thank you!

I've never commented before but I love this story so much. Very well done, you need to post this everywhere else.