All Comments on 'Fate and Destiny Pt. 01'

You have a good story developing here. Lots of deatil about the participants, and some really interesting. When all this comes out as it surely will, will his parishioners turn their backs on him? Will his buddy and business partner turn his back? Is Margaret now sufficiently her own woman to decide whether the divorce is amicable or as enemies, has she maybe already found her own enjoyment on the side? Lots of possible questions. I'm looking forward to see where the story goes from here.

What a slimy piece of shit your "hero" is.

You can't get any lower in the gene pool than this.

Your protagonist is a crashing bore. He's so obsessed with synchronising tedious details of his professional and business interests that I'm surprised he was able to connect with another human for long enough to enter into a sexual relationship with them. Probably a product of an overly-stringent education. He has no place in erotica.