All Comments on 'Father and Son Moments'

by Robert_Furlong

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD. This was the best chapter so far! I feel terrible saying it but...damn, those awkward father-son situations were hot as hell! :)

This was really sweet and fun to read, because I've really grown to like Jake.

Anyway, thanks for the update! I can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Love how Father and Son chat with each other and can be so explicit with each other - again well written Rob - can't wait to get into Roadside Assistance!

Nexus212Nexus212over 2 years ago

Gifted writers often forget continuity.

NaplesjoeNaplesjoeabout 2 months ago

Enjoyed reading your story. Please don’t be too redundant, going around and around, not moving forward. I was reading one story here that was about two friends,now college roommates. I got through 12 chapters and they still hadn’t seen each other nude. It was writing for the sake of writing. Talk about redundancy!

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