All Comments on 'Father Doesn't Know Ch. 04'
by BaileyJensen
- 23 Comments
Anonymousalmost 8 years agofinally! ^_^
been looking forward to the next chapter of this for a while. best gay incest fic on the site!
Anonymousover 7 years agoLoving where this is going (and while I'm thinking about it I love the rest of your stuff as well!)! Keep up the good work!
Rose
Anonymousover 7 years agoI'm excited to see how this story will progress. So far, I'm quite enjoying it. The advancement has been good. The only note I'll give is Bran saying "daddy". It doesn't really feel necessary in this story. It'd be more hot if Bran just calls him "dad". Bran seems pretty forceful in what he wants, and all of a sudden he starts saying daddy? Personally, I would leave the use of that word out. Other than that, doing a phenomenal job!
Anonymousover 7 years agoMore, I need more! Absolutely love your series of stories and can't wait for more to come.. I'm patiently waiting for the next one, but my patience is wearing thin lol.. Love your stories!
Anonymousover 7 years agoAbsolutely love your writing this is such a fun piece and i really like how Bran is saying daddy more. It's hot!
Anonymousover 7 years agoYou're not going to write any more, are you? Why would you stop when the story only just started to get interesting...? One of the pet peeves on this site is that some writers leave their stories leaving in limbo and come back to them years later. I know with writing that once you've got the ball rolling it's hard to stop, but it's even harder to come back to it once you have, because you've lost the essence of what was put into it.
Anonymousover 1 year agoDamn I need more of this please! itās so good Iām invested donāt stop there š„²
Anonymous9 months agoThis definitely has to continue. Bran and his dad need to have the fuck of their life!
Naplesjoe5 months agoPlease donāt stop here. Youāve built it up perfectly, and it was starting to get deeper, pun intended!
