All Comments on 'Father in Law'

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GizmorGizmorabout 10 years ago
Allison

Great story. Hope there is more to come. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Great story!

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerabout 10 years ago
LIKED IT *****

For the most part this was well written. Maybe a couple of typos.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Dan

Dan's got to have some great hair on that gorgeous and muscular chest, even if it is salt-and-pepper in color. What a wonderful catch he is! Let her ride his cock all the way down to his pubes!

sandytreessandytreesabout 10 years ago

More to come I hope :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow one of the best

The beginning was a little too long for my taste. Once into it, the build-up was delightful. The description and phrasing are excellent. I loved how professionally the author managed the conversational mode. I appreciate the story length as I don't like extended same family ... chapters that keep the same theme

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
No person should be taken for granted.

What this man did for his daughter in law, is the best, and this storry was so much more than just sexy as hell!

T

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is so beautiful and so tender and loving.

I most definitely want a sequel, when she finally moves in, maybe even sleeps in his bed. Afterall she is divorced, her husband left her. Dan is a good man but lonely. She is a good woman and lonely. They need each other. And Dan will be a good grandfather to the young girls.

He will show those girls what a loving man is and how a loving man treats his wife.

Anonymous
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