All Comments on 'Father Marcus and Me'

That was very naughty of you, specially for not wearing panties while having your confession. Please continue the story.

very erotic, want to see where this goes... What a morning pick up

There must be more, soon please. Well written, held my attention. My only suggestion is that you needed to explain how she could reach through the grill, undress him and suck his cock. I have never been in a confessional and the images I have seen in movies, etc. would seem to make this impossible. So there is some explanation, but you didn't tell me in a way I understood. You saw how it unfolded in your mind, but I couldn't join you there and "see" the action.

Thanks for writing.

You should write you text in a good word processor before you upload it. If the word processor is properly set to recognize spelling mistakes, grammatical deficiencies, improper punctuation and other linguistic imperfections, a readable product might result. For example: you repeatedly wrote "Farther" instead of "Father", "cause" instead of " 'cause" or even better "because", "and all kinds of thoughts was ... ", "Another great thing, was ...", "you wont say anything too anyone" and so on and so forth.

Don't worry about the spelling and grammar too much for now....see if you can download a free copy of Word in English. because it tells you when you've made a mistake in spelling and in grammar. It would be a good idea to connect with someone who will gently Mentor you.....but you DO show promise!! LOL