by Tribad
Very well written. The length and detail were perfect and I hope you add more to the story. Excited to see where her experience takes them.
Please let Daddy FUCK HIS BABY GIRL.
I am as hard as her Dad.
How soon for the next chapter
My pussy is throbbing! I need Daddy to fuck his baby girl!! Please more SOON!!
Unlike live4thebj, I don't think you need there to be physical contact between the two in the first part. In fact, I almost felt like I imagine Terry was, in that with each interaction I thought (and hoped) that this would be the one where she would reach for his cock. The teasing that he experienced is felt by the reader.
I think perhaps the one thing I felt like I needed more of was a description of Emma's body. Now I'm gonna put my hand up and say this is something that I'm not the best at myself, but that was all that I would have liked to make the story a bit more visual.
I would do anything for my daughter or my over 25 year old granddaughters. Anything. But I hope she pegs him!
I would like to see that the father got her daughter pregnant and make kinky things in public
Olny I imagine the father as a person like walter white, from breaking bad? someone at principle very decent but who let its inner perversity slowly takes all control over himself?
Kept my cock throbbing while I imagined playing with a daughter (that I wish I had) Hope he fills her cunt full of cum in part 2
Especially loved that the daughter swallows her daddy's cum.
That's a sign of a good girl who loves her daddy.
My daughter only swallows my cum on rare occasions. But when she looks me in the eyes and swallows, it drives me Insane!