All Comments on 'Father Time Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story!

I'm loving this story. My only critism is that her name keeps changing between Molly and Holly. Other than that, good stuff :)

TigersmanTigersmanabout 9 years ago
Getting hot

This story keeps heating up. I like the fact the daughter missed her pill.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 6 years ago
Losing Interest

Rapidly losing interest. Seems you can't remember if the daughter's name is MOLLY or HOLLY!! Details make (or break) the story.

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