All Comments on 'Father Time'

I loved it great work id like to see a sequal

Awesome story, one of the best I've read in a while. Thanks!

But the sexual descriptions read like stereo instructions. ***

...but probably should have only been a 3.5. As someone else has noted, the sex is all a bit dry and emotionless.

Great story and to the point. It doesn't take 5 pages to make love.

The bet was a clever plot device. However, I think the father should have had a more difficult time overcoming the taboo of going to bed with his daughter. It just seemed too easy for him to go from father to lover. Good story.

I hope to get to know soon who my real father is. Would love to bond with him, have sex with him over and over. Become his lover, wife and mother of his children. I want to own him and I want him to own me. Incest is the best sex in the whole world! I love you daddy, no matter where you are. I am waiting for you to be yours forever.. to be filled with your seed.