by AMMA
Not a bad story. WOuld have been nice to see him join in.
Not enough actual sex though and you really need to read your story again before you submit it. THere are heaps of errors which, I know, are from carelessness and not because you dont know. Cheers
not bad at all the story starts and ends abruptuly need more descreption the plot is real horny and nice ,more stories please dont give up