All Comments on 'Father's Day Hot Tub Time'

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TastytressTastytressalmost 9 years ago
Short... Hot

There is more to the story. It felt like you rushed to finish it.

kinkboikinkboialmost 9 years ago

Agreed that this story had a great build-up and then... was over. It could use another page of the actual event taking place. Good though.

slavegirl97slavegirl97over 8 years ago
very good, thank you.

i have read several of your stories, wonderful.

thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

# 1 if not better .

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