All Comments on 'Faulty Logic'

by proreader

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
hmmm

i'm sure many will enjoy, though for me the ending ruined it. maybe i'm just a sucker for happy endings but the possibility of death killed it for me. luckily for me i climaxed half way through whilst the story was still hot

xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Loved it!

Love your writing style. This and the other story you wrote and the unexpected endings gave me a jolt of surprise that I really enjoyed. Thank you for the pleasant read :)

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