All Comments on 'Faux Realm Ch. 04'

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taco1085 about 6 years ago

wow- keep up the great work.

keep up the great work

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

I like the story, but...

You have a great premise and characters are good too. My major problem is the story feel disjointed. You do a lot of time jumps and location jumps. There are some serious plot holes too.

Please keep writing.

Thank you.

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