All Comments on 'Favor Redeemed Ch. 04'

Every chapter is intriguing. I am realliny loving this story. I liked the ending of this chapter lots. I want to see how Amelia acclimates and I want to see how she interacts with the alpha. Also, how is she going to apply for her divorce while she is working out there? Such a good story. I can't wait for more. Thanks.

I have a feeling she won't have to get a divorce,I think the reason the Alpha looks as if he has been in a fight is because he has probably taken care of her husband! It would go with his statement at the end.

i hope he gives her time to get used to the idea of being his mate. so often in stories about mates; it is a meet the mate, be denied by the mate, force the mate to accept, then mate. make him earn her trust then love by going slow and show her compassion that was taken from her.

I really like this story so far but i really wish u would submit more then one chapter at a time I just want to know what happens already lol

I also think the husband has been taken care of, either killed or so badly beaten he won't fight a divorce. But the obstacle of Amelia's reluctance to enter a relationship still remains. I look forward to the next chapters to see what makes Amelia change her mind.

Yves

I know Amelia is trying to earn her way and be independent because of the mess her husband put her through. There isn't anything wrong with that but her pride is going to irk me after a while. She seem like the type of person that would have no problem helping others but has a problem with receiving it. I say take the help she went to the pack for it pay it foward later on.

Interesting read looking forward to see how it all pans out.

I must admit this is a different take on the whole mating ritual. Looking forward to see how Amelia integrates into pack life. I love the subtle fore-shadowing you are implementing throughout the story thus far. It going be nice to see her take the journey to realization that pack is her destiny.

But I like how the story is progressing. Good pace.

Yes, I know there are typos. I actually had a comment at the beginning when I submitted, but somehow it didn't make it when it posted. I have lost my editor so I am trying to correct my own typos, which obviously isn't working. I apologize for them, but I decided to post with typos rather than keep everyone waiting. :)

Thanks for updating! Enjoying it so far!

I hope that the fighting that Brendan was doing wasn't with Amelia's husband. She might be relieved but I don't think she would be pleased if Brendan beat him or killed him.

I really hope the next chapter is up soon because I'm addicted to this story!

I'm enjoying your story so far, and I really hope you are able to keep up the pace. It kills me to wait months for an update!

My one criticism is the characterization of Amelia's personality. You have written her as pragmatic, nervous and self-conscious, a leader, and exuberant and friendly. Those things don't at all have to be mutually exclusive, but the way you've written her, especially in this chapter, feels a little schizophrenic. By and large it isn't something I would normally be bothered about-- it has to do with the mood changes due to her unusual situation causing the direct and indirect characterizations to be in conflict. I think why I noticed it this time is because she so suddenly became SO HAPPY and was grinning infectiously even though she was still quite anxious.

So, not a huge deal, but if you ever do a rewrite, and for consideration in future writings, maybe tone down on the sudden, contagious glee. Give the character and audience a bit more transition. It doesn't take much. Just a few words added/removed/changed/whatever.

But I'm loving it. So just keep writing. That's most important.

I love it and can't wait for the next one! By the way when will the next one be up

Gah, I wish the damn series was complete. So far you have been getting 5's from me and man I hate waiting for the next chapter. Hurry up and finish it darn it!!!

On a side note I do wish the chapters were longer. I tend to like 3 pages or so per chapter but that might slow down the posting of new chapters.

Happily I find your editor has been at work, and this chapter is the product of his or her labor as the errors are way down (they always distract from my reading enjoyment). That said, keep up the good work... this story has great possibilities!!!

I am enjoying the story........more please

Stephen J

Hi, really enjoying this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Hope I don't have to wait too long...... :)

Excellent story; just wondering what's the ETA for the next chapter?

I hope to have the next chapter published soon. It is written, but I have no editor right now and have not had time. Unfortunately a recent personal tragedy has taken up all my time and quite frankly been a detractor from my writing. Again, I'm sorry for the delay and hope to have more published soon.

I hope you recover quickly ,I send you light and healing energy. I hope it does not affect your writing too much as I love the characters personalities.

I am chafing at the bit waiting for the next chapter ,I hope it has 12 pages to it.

Stephen J

Can't wait for the next part

hi there if you look on the forum for lit i think there's a editor category or one of your loyal readers would probably do it. i love your writing style its a different type of wolf story. i'm really surprized like other wolf stories that Amelia doesn't seem to be feeling the mate pull. i also just had a thought he got into a fight i'm wondering if he went after her husband??? omg the possibilities. cant' wait for the next chapters your definatly one of my favs

Ok, well I decided to submit as far as I had gotten in my editing of chapter 5. So it was submitted yesterday and hopefully will post soon. Thank you everyone for the kind comments. I'm already working on the next bit. Hopefully my muse stays active.

meelana

Can't wait for the update. Love it so far.

This is simply a lovely story; Thank you.

Annabelle

You do realize that "forcibly claimed" translates as "rape", right? I hope Brendan realizes that he's been somewhat of an arrogant, self-important jackass to her.