All Comments on 'Favour for an Old Man'

More chapters welcome

A good story for your first on Literotica.

I wish I had a neighbor willing to help me out with many things.

a lot of improvement in many areas before you could even call this fair.

I have to say, I found this to be funny and naughty at the same time! It was a bit of a dirty little pleasure!

What a great way to help a neighbor. Now if I can get the gal next door...

Great start but don't finish it there, this story has great potential. I am sure Fred has a few friends Lisa would not mind helping out.

Many more chapters please.

Great first story... like other contributers I would like to see next chapters.. this had me creamin' my boxers

Excellent.....left me wanting more of this story and more stories by you!

Lucky Fred! Wow! This tale was told exquistely!

The way this was told was to die for! Thanks for the excitement!

I will look for more stories from you!

Thanks for writing!

Just found your story, and it was great! If it could stand anything, it would be a little more detail in the end--from his perspective, and hers. But otherwise this was a real pleasure.

Thanks, wonderful story. Nice slow build up. Loved it. Thanks you so much. nicecleanfunguy@gmail.com

would love to see this story continued, its great

Hope you write another chapter. Thanks!

YES I agree another chapter please

The dialogue in this story was horrifically bad. When they're not stuttering, they're so polite that it borders on creepy. You made your characters act so awkward, and unnatural that it made their personalities sickening. Nothing about it seemed genuine, or believable. It was just really irritating to read.

I really liked it! I would love to see more...

Could I ask you to proceed along the lines where:

- he brings some of his friends..., perhaps some show up "unexpectedly" during a fashion show...

- perhaps he takes some pictures & shares them with his friends first, to pique their interest.

- continue with Lisa's internal struggle... add some reluctance on her part for his friends to come in her

- finally, it would be great for her father to show up sometime...

Whatever way you go, thanks for sharing.

All the best

Some great suggestions have been made here. Please take it up

Some great ideas have been suggested

More avenues to develope in this story.

Lucky old man..i loved the way he asked her to strip one by one..and she also enjoyed the process silently...wish i get a chance to strip for this old man..

Horny old man stories are my fav. He should of sucked her tits though.

Not sure why I'm posting the comment since you haven't been on in 10 years, but i loved the realism of this story. I definitely can see this happening. Hope you come back eventually. =)