All Comments on 'Fay Flowers'

I thought the end part was a bit of a letdown, but then I realized that the reason I felt that was because the rest of the story was just so incredible. Plus, I really didn't want it to end, and I almost never feel that was about reading off computer screens. Wonderful work.

I like the characters and the image...the shower scene left me dripping...

This reads like a true story. It could become a book. Please continue!

Great start to a realistic story.

Beautiful story. I loved the honesty. Even if it is fiction. I was worried when Stallone turned up, thinking it was going to descend into ridiculous fantasy, but you carried it off.

i loved this story i got off so many times i want to know more of the characters i love it please continue with this story

The writing style is unlike anything I'm used to but the story manages to pull the reader along nicely. I almost felt like a diary graced by Fiorenza's pen and fingertips each night. Great story. I'm interested in seeing where you go with the tale.

Sincerely,

~lucky

Fast-paced and engaging story. ~Imp

This should not have been in the lesbian category.

this shood not hav been in this category but, costructive critisism? i didnt like, but again i only read 75% of it so my bad i guess... :/