All Comments on 'Fear and Arousal'

This is a great story and an excellent first submission. I hope to read more from you! Five stars!

What a marvellous beginning to your time here at Literotica! This was an excellent, well-written story, particularly as a first! Very well done -- five stars.

I was sometimes uncomfortable and sometimes excited. Your Mistress has a bit more edge than I would want, but she seemed to create a good balance for her slave and his needs. Any chance of more about these characters?

Great first story! I kinda wish she didn't let him cum but I love creativity of the public humiliation, Welcome to lit!

This is the correct way to write erotic fiction. Awesome story.

I don't know how long it has been since you wrote this, but I sincerely hope that you have written and will continue to write more. Mmmff. I want this kind of slave very much.

I wish I had a slave

Thank you for writing this.

I enjoyed the story, the tension and gradual build up in activity greatly. Led to a glorious crescendo at the end.

Well written and thoroughly enjoyable.