All Comments on 'Fear of Storms'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent!

5/5 on all counts.

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RavenOnCaRavenOnCaover 9 years ago
Very nice

Very nice story, believable, and very sexually charged indeed. I am so looking forward to the next chapter !!!

The story line seemed maybe a little far fetched, but still believable. Only suggestion I might have is give a little more detail as personal appearances, without having to spoil it with FF breasts or massive dick size.

Thanks again for the enjoyable read.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 3 years ago

I wonder what Janelle's evening had been like that caused her to return so late? Maybe Peter wasn't her first that night? Something to think about. Great story. You're the master. ~~ JB

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